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Monday, 10 September 2012

GHD Advert
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  1. A Hammond3 October 2012 at 07:09

    C+
    Faye this is a really good effort. Your essay uses terminology and thoroughly analyses the advert in a pleasing level of detail.
    > check your spelling of terminolgy e.g. connote not connate
    > don't repeat yourself

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